Whether it's a manuscript or website copy, I give you clear, actionable insight into what's working and what needs to change.
The big-picture read your manuscript needs before anything else. I evaluate structure, pacing, character arcs, thematic coherence, point-of-view consistency, and narrative momentum — the layers beneath the prose that determine whether a story works.
This is not line editing or copyediting. I'm not fixing sentences; I'm telling you how the story holds together at the chapter, act, and manuscript level.
Does the story begin in the right place? Are acts balanced? Do subplots earn their space?
Where does the story drag? Where does it rush? What's creating friction — and is the friction intentional?
Are your characters changing? Do their internal arcs connect to the external plot? Do their decisions feel earned?
Does the reader feel what they should feel? Are the story's emotional beats landing where they're placed?
Does the story know what it's about? Are the central ideas reinforced or undermined by plot and character choices?
Focused developmental feedback on a single chapter or short section. Lighter in scope than a full manuscript edit, but no less rigorous — I bring the same analytical eye to a single chapter as I do to a full novel.
Faster turnaround. Targeted feedback. The right tool when you need a specific read, not a full manuscript review.
For a subscription, I'll personally craft newsletters tailored to your audience and brand. Delivered in intervals of your choice, each newsletter builds engagement, shares valuable insights, and strengthens your connection with subscribers.
Whether you need weekly updates, monthly deep dives, or custom schedules, this service ensures your voice reaches your audience consistently and authentically.
Learn MoreStrong website copy isn’t just for writers. It’s for anyone who wants to present their work, services, or ideas clearly and confidently online.
I help small business owners, creatives, consultants, and service providers shape website messaging that feels authentic, easy to scan, and tuned to your audience. That includes copy that supports SEO and helps the right people find your work.
Sometimes you don't need a written report — you need a conversation. We offer a free chapter consultation and critique to see if we are the right fit.
We can cover whatever you need: why a chapter isn't working, how to fix a plot hole, whether your structure is holding, or just a general feedback and critique.
Live conversation via video call or your preferred platform
Written feedback on one chapter, delivered ahead of or after the call
No. I focus exclusively on developmental work — structure, pacing, arcs, and clarity at the story level. Once you've revised based on developmental feedback, a separate line or copyeditor is the right next step.
Typically speculative fiction (fantasy, science fiction, horror) and literary fiction, but I'm open to other genres including romance mystery and non-fiction.
This depends on the project but can be discussed upon consultation. Generally, a full manuscript developmental edit takes 4–8 weeks, while a chapter critique can usually be delivered in 1–2 weeks. For newsletter and website copy services, turnaround times vary based on the scope and frequency of content needed. A popular option is a monthly newletter in which A date will be selected and regular content will appear at that interval.
Yes. Most of my clients are working on their first or second novel. Developmental editing is especially valuable early in a writer's development — it builds pattern recognition and craft knowledge that carries across every project. For brands, I have experience with newletters for many different areas of industry and there's really nothing I won't consider working on.
Book a free Consultation and we'll figure out the right path for your project.